Analysing one sequence from the Rough Cut

For this task, I am going to analyse the second chorus of the song which is from 1:20 to 1:45. As you can see from 1:21 to 1:24, the It's My Time sign was edited slower compared to the song so we need to speed up that scene. Also, to add more cuts so it would be edited to the beats.

Another sequence that can be improved is the last 40 seconds of the song. This sequence need to be re-edit as it doesn't make sense because as an audience, we see the artist dancing around and there wasn't enough cutting. Therefore, we need to add more different types of shots and more cutting so it would make sense and be polished properly.